Amber 4M The light was so bright

The light was so bright that I could not see. No wonder the door said: ‘Do not enter this room` Somehow I locked the door. I wondered how to get out. But   I had an idea ! One   minute later I Screamed “Help!’’ No one came! Luckily I had my phone with me. I diled mums phone number but there was no awnser.  That minute I felt so worried that I started trembling. What could I do? I ran out of ideas. But then I realized there was a red button !it said press to unlock!

8 thoughts on “Amber 4M The light was so bright

  1. It was so scary!!!!!!
    My hands were trembling as well
    I liked the ending and all the adjectives.
    Keep up the good work!!!!

  2. Amber,
    What a super piece of writing, well done.
    You need to check through your work – there’s a few mistakes to find and correct.
    Great use of speech to move the story on. I wonder where the button was?

    Thanks for your entry
    Andrew
    Team 100wc

  3. Amber, that sounded really scary! I’m glad you found a way to get out. I wonder if there was anything unusual in the room? Or was the caution sign just because you got trapped inside?

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