Edua and Amelia 4S The light was so bright

Yawn! The old coffin creaked open as a pale figure rose out of it, remembering his last juicy meal. A black sky spread above his mossy castle, meaning that the hunt was in its first stage. You  wouldn’t  have wanted to be outside that night. As always, the paint stripped window was open, ready to be jumped out of by a hungry vampire. After   4 minutes of searching   for prey   the vampire ran home cursing the stupid sun for being so bright . He miserably lay back in his black coffin still cursing the light that was so bright that  disabled him to hunt.

3 thoughts on “Edua and Amelia 4S The light was so bright

  1. Hi Edua and Amelia,

    I really enjoyed reading this 100wc. It was a very unique approach to it and I enjoyed it even more because I like reading stories about zombies and vampires.

    ‘You wouldn’t have wanted to be outside that night’ – this is a fantastic way of drawing your reader in. I certainly wouldn’t have wanted to be out on a night where a black sky was spreading!

    Thank you for sharing.

    Mr Connor
    Team 100wc

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