Edward and Jack Yr 4 the rusty gate creaked

The rusty gate creaked as Capitan underpants and his sidekick Mr Little Dude were exploring  the White House and then met president Obama and Queen Elizabeth 2nd. Suddenly Mr Little Dude got shrunk by Obama so he changed his name to Mr Very Little Dude. After that Mr Very Little Dude put lemon pie on Capitan underpants pants. Then Mr Very Little Dude jumped out the window and Captain underpants chased after him next Mr Very Little Dude got struck by lightning and they took him too Hospital  and then a doctor  gummy bear said he had a broken rib.

3 thoughts on “Edward and Jack Yr 4 the rusty gate creaked

  1. Hello Edward and Jack,

    What a strange fantasy adventure! Two very odd characters, Captain Underpants and Mr Little Dude, have somehow found themselves exploring the White House. Stranger still, President Obama seems to have more power than just the Presidential powers of his office. Poor Mr Very Little Dude. Perhaps he has learned not to be where he wasn’t allowed. Very creative… well done. 🙂

    I did notice some minor errors in your entry. Mostly, remember special names have capital letters, in particular people’s names. With such a creative mind, I hope you keep entering the 100WC.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Certainly a very action packed text! Could imagine it being a great comic strip or a script for a cartoon. Well done!

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