Holly 4S The light was so bright

The light was so bright it blinded me.Where was I ?suddenly I realized something was crawling up my shivery back.i tried to work out what it was but it was no use.i could hardly move .just at  that moment I felt a bony finger come over my shoulder .With a cool breeze of wind,I woke to find I was tangled up in all my blankets  like I was tied up in my dream .as I rubbed my eyes I saw my grandma sitting by my side ready to say good morning.But what was the thing crawling up my back

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  1. To Holly

    I like how you beign your writing with the bright light and then a question. It really hooked me in as a reader and made me want to keep reading.
    As I kept reading I was still intrigued. You have used lot’s of suspense within your writing.
    What was the thing crawling up your back?

    From Mrs Natusch
    team 100WC

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