Imi 4S The light was so bright

Matt awoke. He ran down the steep stairs. He had a slightly scary day planned, he was going to the spooky graveyard to put flowers on his mums grave. He loved his mum but he did not love the grave yard. He ran over and past the spooky rusty gates when he saw a light. The light was so bright it blinded him, when he looked again to matts disbelief he saw a ghost with giant eagle wings floating up. It looked just like his mum and it was all over her grave. It vanished matt dropped the flowers and walked away hand on heart.

2 thoughts on “Imi 4S The light was so bright

  1. Yes, a little scary, but you write well.

    Remember to check through your work, looking at spellings and punctuation!

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