Issie and Liyah 4S The light was so bright

Strolling to the park , the sun was getting brighter every second making the land seem like a shining light in the golden sun. As I was walking to the old wooden bench I saw my beautiful friend penny reading a book called ‘ Treasure island’  . Her eyes were scanning the page taking all words in to her mind. ‘Hi penny’ I yelled right across the park. The sun started to beam down attracting bugs from all over the place. Slowly creatures walked up to us and soon covered our Bodies. We started running. ‘ahhhhhhhhhhhh’ we both had fell down a hole for eternity!

One thought on “Issie and Liyah 4S The light was so bright

  1. Hi there
    What a great story – you described the sun beaming down really well. Great work – keep on writing!
    Helen (Team 100WC)

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