Lisa-Marie 4M The light was so bright

As I stumbled onto my Unicorn, Alaska, we flew up into the sky. Gummy Bears dropped out of the clouds but suddenly, Alaska froze. I thought to myself “What in the world has happened?” I gazed into the clouds and a bright light hit me, in fact, the light was so bright that I fell out the sky. Luckily, my trusty Unicorn broke the enchantment and swooped down to save me. I saw the Determination in her eyes and I knew that she would do anything to help me. Friendship was what made us believe in each other. We’re best friends.

One thought on “Lisa-Marie 4M The light was so bright

  1. Hi Lisa-Marie
    This is a lovely piece of writing, in fact it sounds like the beginning of a longer myth or fairy tale. You have all the right ingredients – a mythical creature with a fantastic name, strange characters doing impossible things, a friendship bond that cannot be broken… What happens next?!
    From Mrs Fine

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