Lucy 4M The light was so bright

There was a light that  was bright in the distance and it was so bright that the world was lit up and gummy bears melted and girls started to sweat and places like Australia melting. Someone had to save them so they called the light inspectors to look at the light of the world. It was so hot that it took one layer of skin and there hear had to be shaved off. So it was disaster and the animals died because of the heat so there was only a few animals left in the world and that was sad.

One thought on “Lucy 4M The light was so bright

  1. Oh dear Lucy, what a sad ending and very dramatic! I love the idea of light inspectors! Don’t forget to read back your sentences to check them. I find that if I read them out loud it helps.

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