Molly 4M The light was so bright

The light was so bright it blinded my eyes and it shined on the windows it cracked the roof .The light glittered on my face burning it .I went down the stairs hoping the big bright light had gone in. After a while I went to the shops I came in with a miserable smile on my face because the light hadn’t gone in yet again .I went to the shops again and the light was still there .I SCREAMED as LOUD as I could and my mum was wondering what was happening .I wanted the light to go back were it came  .

2 thoughts on “Molly 4M The light was so bright

  1. Hi Molly. You use lots of description to explain just how bright the light was. I especially like ‘the light glittered on my face burning it’. In order to have the intensity of heat to crack the roof it must have been shockingly hot. I’m not surprised you wanted it to go back where it came from.
    From Mrs Fine

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