Samuel 4M The light was so bright

After months of waiting the day finally came. Today he was going to get chocolate cake. Samuel quickly opened the cupbord but to his surprise it was all gone. Samuel screamed but he screamed like a girl. Then he ran to the door and shouted “who stole my chocolate cake!” He knocked on every house saying “have you got some chocolate cake?” until one person said “yes” he sped in like a missile to the kitchen. The light was so bright and there in the light was chocolate cake he smiled and ate it all up and he grinned again.

4 thoughts on “Samuel 4M The light was so bright

  1. I love the idea of waiting for chocolate cake, I can understand how exciting that is!. Well done for using a great simile. Remember to start your speech with a capital letter

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