One thought on “Deserted Island by Abbie, Nora & Louis

  1. Hi Abbie, Nora and Louis
    I like the way you use the narrator’s bar to tell your readers what is happening in your comic strip – it helps move the story along, and sometimes all you need is a time connective like ‘Afterwards’. Did you enjoy making it?
    Mrs Fine

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